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J.F. Dempster's avatar

“crown first and doubt last / lungs burning with belief alone”

Perfect

Cipher⁉️✨✨'s avatar

Like a leap of faith :)

The Girl Who Caught Up ♡'s avatar

Loveee the first line, I can feel the essence of excitement in this poem

Messy Ink Poetry's avatar

Thank you! I'm glad the excitement came through💕

Izabella 💌's avatar

“no one great ever tiptoes

into destiny

they dive” I just loved 🤍

Messy Ink Poetry's avatar

Thank you Izabella🫶

The Outsider’s Notebook's avatar

I really like it, nice work

The Quiet Hour Poet's avatar

Beautiful poem! Thank you so much for incorporating my words 🙏

Messy Ink Poetry's avatar

Thanks! It was a pleasure to create with you

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

I love this poem! Maybe my favorite of this series.

Messy Ink Poetry's avatar

Thank you Amrita! It's one of my favourites too

Rolando Andrade's avatar

wonderful.